@Wildfire: I have them every once and a while, and this one was a pretty harsh.
@Queen of Trash: I try to avoid what I call the grandmother critique. The one where you're nothing but praise and nothing useful. Mostly I just noted the overuse of I, and a need for more descriptions. First person is looks like the easiest one, but is actually the hardest of perspective.
@vengeance: Hopefully.
@Queen of Trash: I try to avoid what I call the grandmother critique. The one where you're nothing but praise and nothing useful. Mostly I just noted the overuse of I, and a need for more descriptions. First person is looks like the easiest one, but is actually the hardest of perspective.
@vengeance: Hopefully.