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Questing: Soulcaster | Woodland Fae | Fall Harvest | Sticky Fingers | Leo | Astrologer x3 | Capricorn
'sleepy blink' I be back..got tired of the but kickage i was dealing with on pro haha.
i'll for sure be checking out that library app. I am constantly reading through books.
Currently recovering from large amounts of PTSD. I'll post when I can, please ping for replies. Things are very difficult for me right now.
@ephenay: Yeah, her profile is mostly done, just haven't done a ref image for her yet. XD
@Amber Lynne: you so should! poor azazel doesn't have many either.
are they new new?
@ephenay: new new? No.
Well, Lil kinda is?
Az is a relatively new chara in the sense that I've had him for about... ehhh... 3? years by this point.
Only recently gave him a profile though, lol
Lil is about 5? 6? months old. But again, new profile.
@Amber Lynne: you consider 3 years new? mann, that's as long as one of my oldest XD (then again i have very little characters lol..)
that's pretty cool, tho! i liked what you got down for az, was kinda surprised there wasn't more art of him
@ephenay: Considering Casey is from when I was 16-17, and I'm 31? Yeah, 3 years is pretty new. LOL
And Az? Yeahhh, well... That's a thing? lol.
People tend to stick with the characters that have more art, it seems. BUT! maybe my art contest will help with that next month =)
@Amber Lynne: when you put it like that.. XD
yeah i see you now. he was the one i picked to draw, really liked the sound of his original form and stuff. it's a shame x) all good, though! i have high hopes for your art contest~ there are many talented people on this site. oh and if you need help with anything, lemme know ^^
@ephenay: Well, there's only one thing that I can think of.
Wanna give my thread a read over? Lemme know if you see any massive grammar issues, or nonsensical stuffs? Or whatever? =)
(Also gets you a sneak peek at it. XD)
@pagliacci: it’s the librarian :D and thank you
Ping me for attention. I tend to wander.
@Amber Lynne: sure! i would love to ^^
always good to have a second pair of eyes
Questing: Soulcaster | Woodland Fae | Fall Harvest | Sticky Fingers | Leo | Astrologer x3 | Capricorn
@pagliacci: I am still sucking at the game but doing much better, im a very happy star 'nods'
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Avi art is best gift
@Amber Lynne: overall the thread looks organized and nice ^^ i checked it out on mobile too. grammar and spelling looks good to me, and it reads well.
i have some suggestions and questions that i hope will help!
-the headers (entry info, prize pool, entry form, winning conditions) would be easier to read with an extra space between the words.
-some groups of text that are between 2 [ hr ] aren't centered vertically. like extra/uneven line spacing? would look cleaner to even those out. hope that makes sense
-adding space between the bullet points in the rules could make it feel less block-y and easier to read
-i was confused for a minute reading the criteria in winning conditions and how the bolded words blends with the description. maybe add some more punctuation if the sentence starts after the bolded criteria
-as an artist, the accuracy criteria made me think a bit. what does she mean 'details' tab? ohhh, like on a layer when doing digital? am i getting art advice? can't say i fully understand, sorry D:
-i feel like entry info would make sense closer to the entry form and stuff, but that works too. if you could shorten this post i think it would be quicker to know about the extra reward for doing art for characters with none. also, might help to specify what you mean by chance of prizes. will there be a raffle or did you mean the contest in general? that sort of thing.
-in the intro, you mention a chance at older crates and orb items. and in the entry form i notice the 'My Entry Is: Volt or Bundle', so i know those are prizes, but don't really see them mentioned anywhere else :O
-'My Entry Is' could be said as 'I am entering for..' for more clarification
some of these might be because i'm kinda dumb, so sorry for the long post!!
-some groups of text that are between 2 [ hr ] aren't centered vertically. like extra/uneven line spacing? would look cleaner to even those out. hope that makes sense
-adding space between the bullet points in the rules could make it feel less block-y and easier to read
-i was confused for a minute reading the criteria in winning conditions and how the bolded words blends with the description. maybe add some more punctuation if the sentence starts after the bolded criteria
-as an artist, the accuracy criteria made me think a bit. what does she mean 'details' tab? ohhh, like on a layer when doing digital? am i getting art advice? can't say i fully understand, sorry D:
-i feel like entry info would make sense closer to the entry form and stuff, but that works too. if you could shorten this post i think it would be quicker to know about the extra reward for doing art for characters with none. also, might help to specify what you mean by chance of prizes. will there be a raffle or did you mean the contest in general? that sort of thing.
-in the intro, you mention a chance at older crates and orb items. and in the entry form i notice the 'My Entry Is: Volt or Bundle', so i know those are prizes, but don't really see them mentioned anywhere else :O
-'My Entry Is' could be said as 'I am entering for..' for more clarification
some of these might be because i'm kinda dumb, so sorry for the long post!!
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@ephenay: For your points-
- Headders are a WIP!
I'm actually working on getting banners from Anarchist Beauty ATM for them =)
- the HR thing annoys the ever loving hell out of me BECAUSE of that.
- Duly noted on the points! I didn't even consider that. I just know when I tend to write it on paper, I don't leave a space. Lol.
- Do they? I ... didn't even notcie. I'll tweak 'em~<3
- Details tab... as in on their profiles
- Yeah, I was considering shifting them to be closer. I don't want them all together as I like having them separate, myself.
- That would be because I have done a ton of editing LOL
And... forgot to take some things out. Oooops.
That's why I needed someone to give it a read over LOL
Thanks!
- No worries, you ain't dumb!
@inatlaka: The chara wips? Yeah.
IO did use a body base though. Don't have the links handy, but I didn't do the base. I just did the designs.
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Ping me. always
ALWAYS looking for art of my Characters
If you do art, PM me
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Having you as a Voltie would be awesome.