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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:41:09 )
@Lunakiri: I know. It made me so sad. =(
But you saw it, so all's good. ;D
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:44:53 )
@Dowan: THAT IS NOT A CAT. IT'S A FREAKING FURRY CLOUD!
[A really happy one, regardless]
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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:46:45 )
@Lunakiri: I showed another person that gif and they were like 'IT'S A RUG I JUST WANNA SNUGGLE ON'
It has to be the one of the cutest kitty clouds I've seen. LOL

I'm writing poems for User's contest because it's so addicting...
send halp
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:51:34 )
@Dowan: Lmao.
I can understand that reaction!\
It's freaking adorable.

And poems for a contest?
Caught my interest......
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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:52:58 )
@Lunakiri: Go look at User's thread! You should try your hand at it. =D
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:54:23 )
@Dowan: I think I will~<3
^ ^
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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:55:37 )
@Lunakiri: Haha, you'd actually be really good at it given your very interesting mindset. /winkwinknudgenudge
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:57:05 )
@Dowan: Have you read any of my poems?
They're not the best, but I have written a few...
And... they aren't exactly... nice....
> >
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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 09:58:24 )
@Lunakiri: Wait, I actually haven't...
Could I have? Have I seen any? I'm not sure anymore. LOL
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 10:03:01 )
@Dowan:

//whistles innocently as she leaves this spoiler

WARNING FOR MATURE THEMES]
Listen once,
and listen well.
To the story,
I'm about to tell.

It's a dark tale,
One of fright.
I pray you're safe,
Through the night.

Of a young soul,
A young child.
Lost in the forest,
Lost, in the wild.

She knew not what happened,
She dreamed of home.
Not once knowing,
She was never alone.

He hid in the trees,
Watching every move.
She was something of which,
He never did approve.

For three weeks,
And three days.
She was lost,
And there she stayed.

She couldn't leave,
For he wouldn't let her.
For his wrath,
She did incur.

Even she was not sure,
She didn't even know.
What she had done,
To anger him so.

He knew who she was,
And knew where she'd been.
He wanted her so badly,
Wanted her drenched in his sin.

So he kept her there,
Lost in the shadows.
Scared of her dreams,
And scared of the crows.

He watched as she bathed,
As she cleaned herself.
He wanted to freeze her,
Put her on a shelf.

Despite all the pain,
And all the suffering she caused.
He wanted her body,
He wanted her to be lost.

Lost like the winds,
And lost to the seas.
Never to be found,
No one to hear her screams.

He would keep her there,
Where he could keep his gaze.
He'd crafted this forest,
Into his own personal maze.

She would never be free,
And would never go home.
He would keep his little pet,
And he would stay on his throne.

He watched her every move,
and wanted to touch.
He felt himself bursting,
He wanted her so much.

Though she was but a child,
And he knew it was wrong.
He truly did not care,
He would drag her along.

Along the dark path,
To where his sins dwelled.
He would make sure she helped,
To keep the voices quelled.

Her body would be perfect,
Her skin so tasty.
He wanted every piece of her,
But he couldn't be hasty.

He had to take his time,
He had to savour this
For if he were to rush,
It could end as a miss.

He wanted to thrust in,
And to feel her within,
He needed to take her,
Into his den of sin.

One night while she slept,
Blissfully unaware.
He crept up silently,
As she breathed the cool night air.

From that day forth,
Her world was changed.
Her values, her beliefs,
Were all exchanged.

She'd lost herself,
And who she had been.
She didn't care though,
She loved living in sin.

Now at age nine,
She is a perfect pet.
I just need her sisters,
To complete the set.
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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 10:09:27 )
@Lunakiri: I was expecting something along those lines, and you didn't disappoint. That was fantastic. The ending was absolutely amazing. LOL
You definitely have a knack for poems. Like holy crap. You could make a poem shop...
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 10:18:28 )
@Dowan: I.... uhh...
I have more if you wanna read...?
> >
I've never thought they were all that good, to be honest.
The flow needs work, and I can admit that. XD

But I also wrote that 5 years ago > >
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 10:33:47 )
@Dowan: Here's another. It's shorter, and ... dark, yes, but not in the same way as the previous.


It's all dark
I can't see
I can't feel
What's pinning me.

I can't move
And I can breathe
It's all fading
And yet, I seethe.

Nothing seems
Real anymore
I'm trapped here
Don't close the door!

Let me out
Let me free
I just want to go
I want to be me.

Why won't you listen
And why won't you hear
My calls for salvation
Are you not... here?

I thought you would
Be here to stay
With me forever
And never lead me astray.

But now I see
That I've believed a lie
And I now know
That your followers are sly.

They do what they must
To get what they want
I swear I will hurt them
Or perhaps I will just haunt.

What am I saying?
Am I going insane?
To honestly take part
In this fools game?

I feel myself slipping
Beneath all this weight
I can't keep my sanity
Please, open the gate!

Let me go free
I beg of you, please
No … don't buy into it!
I'm here on my knees.

I wish and I dream
For a life of my own
I wish to be me
And not just a clone.
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Donator — She/Her Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 11:16:14 )
@Lunakiri: seems nice in here and hello's
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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 11:21:01 )
@Lunakiri: Yeah, it's a much different darkness. I like how impactful the last line in each... stanza (is that what it's called?) feels from each respective build-up. It also tells an interesting story by the end.
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 11:22:34 )
@Unicorn: Hey there sugar~
Don't get lost amongst the books, canvases, and overall insanity!

@Dowan: Pretty sure that you're right with the term of stanza.

I still have more if you wanan read. XD just say the word~

Click the image to go to my art shop!
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Voltie Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 11:24:40 )
@Lunakiri: Of course! I'm learning with each piece. I don't write poems, but I've always been interested in figuring out how. XD
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Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 11:26:16 )
@Dowan: Fair enough =)
I don't read or write it often, but sometimes.. it's just what my fingers wanna type out. XD


I lost all sense,
All sense of self.
I climbed the fence,
To the world of doubt.
I overcame,
What you believed.
Never meant to maim,
What you did leave.
You memories,
Mean so much.
I beg you, please,
I miss your touch.
I wish for you,
For your embrace.
If I only knew,
How to see your face.
I am begging here,
Please come back.
It's been a year,
I'll pick up the slack.
I can't do this,
Not without you.
I know it was a miss,
But, Jacob, I love you.

Click the image to go to my art shop!
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Donator — She/Her Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 11:32:58 )
@Lunakiri: oh no I won't I love your art, I'd order but I am waiting on
a bear from Sass and I am still trying to buy stuff from Panda.
but hello there I do wanna order from you at some point.
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If you can’t say something nice, Don’t say anything at all!

Donator — Female Posted 7 years ago ( 2017/10/21 11:37:46 )
@Unicorn: Thank you for the love~<3
and no worries! I'm just happy having people chat in here, to be honest. It keeps the thread up for other people to possibly express interest in and perhaps order in the future =)
If the thread fell behind, no one would see it. Lol.
So chatter is good ~<3
[Plus, can be just as enriching in terms of the digital wallet when I'm replying anyway! XD]

Click the image to go to my art shop!
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ALWAYS looking for art of my Characters
If you do art, PM me

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